Happy Solstice! Sun did bounced. Once, i lived with huge seasonal storms, now i live with drought. I miss storms. #stormdream 💤💭🌀 Tried to basket all launch nitpick micro revisions below. Also, page 64 spun out? idk it’s fine.

made like a leaf & renamed

• class, body, back, hands, feet, head & backpack

to

• litter, lamina, midvein, margin, stem, apex & bulb

on the character sheet.​

embraced it & made

.8. Give yourself 3 Gold.

.9. Add “took a name” to What Have I Done.

say

.8. Equip glyph table drop results as gear.

.9. Add all taken names to Who Have I Met?

refilled character sheet “Language Wraps”:

• added check boxes to skills
• moved skills to “What Have I Done”
• added actual skills to Skills
• deleted i.want
• created stare.io

finally decided to just merge pg 38’s

blood drop emoji

mechanic into pg 53’s

storm emoji

couldn’t tell you why i thought the player side and the world side of direct damage should be different. Also, i don’t like the storm as much as the drop. (The drop is mammally subtle, in a “shriek when you see it” sort of way? nvm.) I edited the og pages mostly in the order they appear, so blood drop came first, but then the storm had more staying power. I don’t know. I’m torn. Maybe the drop is better? For a different game, then.

read

□ Finding yourself reaching a new biome □ Finding yourself sketching a new plant + recording 1 relation of it (which — soil? bird?) □ Finding a fauna’s strong + weak axes (do hopes here balance out? Are there more?) □ Finding a Rest pile by losing connection □ Finding a new person + greeting them.

& it made me super sad. It’s standard game design, but i hate it. I don’t want to invite people to play that game. So, i changed it to a game i do what to invite people to play:

□ Finding yourself reaching a new sun ray □ Finding yourself sketching a new mood + recording 1 relation of it (which — soil? bird?) □ Finding a hope’s strong + weak axes (do hopes here balance out? Are there more?) □ Finding a Rest pile by losing connection □ Finding a new cell + greeting them.

expanded an example from

Example: you seek a bird of moonlit feathers the forums say is on your server. Your feather dress could really use a plume. You wave 🍁8 for RNG against the plume’s 🍁20. You wave 6. The plume waves 12. You lose the psithur. You lose 6 connection.

to

Example: you seek a bird of moonlit feathers the forums say is on your server. Your feather dress could really use a plume. You wave 🍁8 for RNG against the plume’s 🍁20. You wave 6. The plume waves 12. You lose the psithur. You lose 6 connection (basically means: until you regain it, you now spend 6% of your time in the game looking for things you don’t get).

got more specific on the humus, taking it from up here

Let’s call the horizons in your litter the humus. Each one is a memory one of you can call to, reminds you to sleep, or sets you up perfectly. Every 10 want you engulf, enter a new horizon by dropping a leaf on the box below to see how your level of connection ferments through you.

down to here

All your lost connection, either healed or lost, is here. Anything not on the Activity Log composes your humus, blind habits savoring shards of you. Every 10 want you engulf, enter a new horizon by dropping a leaf on the box below to see how your wavering connection ferments your play.

realized the whale’s

tribal

&

spotted egg

is in fact

limestone-armored

&

spotted cocoon

reworked

1. Fish eggs hatch and the leaves must pilot them

into

1. Fish eggs the leaves pilot hatch

before then loving the

[1st 50 d100 starting locations]

into

[graffiti]

before then loving the

[2st 50 d100 plot hooks]

into

[graffiti]

changed

these

to

all

so that i could change

silver

to

silver iodide

& have it fit on the line

changed

You will find it’s better

&

You will find it’s fast

to

You will find it’s syrup

&

You will find it’s instant

juxt bc

administered first aid to

I think it’s pretty, but I guess it

risks many tables in oue cynical world would

snagon its more pedantic aspects. Sad shrug.)

to breathe again as

I think it’s pretty, but I guess

many tables in our cynical world would snag

on its more pedantic aspects. Sad shrug.)

mildly articulated

fuzz balls (breeze manip)

as

slow fallers (breeze manip)

made

crack of the licking stone

less thunder-y and more punny as

chip of the licking stone

restructured

Thronethread patch

Install 1 Defense – 🍁 8

Wafer, set in melted sap

to have it erect a colossal

quartet of honeyed

wings capable of

lowering 1 any-sized

assault’s connection to 0.

to be

Thronethread patch

Install 1 Defense – 🍁 8

Wafer, set in melted sap

to have it erect a quartet

of colossal, honeyed

wings capable of

lowering 1 any-sized

pressure’s connection to 0.

administered first aid to

As a reactive tool, usually the World

but also pop, snap, flick or throw on the

table, or send through their message app

the X Card, where they feel uncomfortable,

to breathe again as

As a reactive tool, usually the World

but any player snaps, flicks or throws on the

table, or sends through their message app

the X Card where they feel uncomfortable,

added to documentation:

I don’t explicitly endorse the words or beliefs of anyone on this list.

to the back of the pdf:

removed one copy of the storm tracker

added one copy of the calendar

[this & pg 64/7 is where the extra 4 MB in the file come from]

Also, as per Batts’ public request, i will now be charging admission fees for entry into the interstitial art exhibit on both this and that shelf. If you are a:

• social worker/crew member,
• teacher in any capacity,
• write reviews as a hobby,
• make less than me (USD15k/yr)

you are not allowed to buy this or that. You are required to get the person you heard this from to send you the file or to get a download code from me (comment below or @2shva on twitter).